tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post2694607892397998537..comments2024-01-02T22:33:52.873-08:00Comments on Rainbow Lyrics and Mellow Mushrooms: Snippet Jan 7Layla Dorinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-37019090962703446832017-01-14T14:11:01.139-08:002017-01-14T14:11:01.139-08:00Fun snippet. I can see the scene clearly -- right ...Fun snippet. I can see the scene clearly -- right down to them glaring at each other.PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-7360559487617472002017-01-13T15:20:08.808-08:002017-01-13T15:20:08.808-08:00I love the annoyance (even anger) in the snippet, ...I love the annoyance (even anger) in the snippet, but your reply above about Jesse having a reason to want to be there alone got my attention. I like these two a lot already. :)Debbie McGowanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18238044171968552477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-58511529624006395912017-01-13T14:41:54.857-08:002017-01-13T14:41:54.857-08:00I'm liking this beginning...I'm liking this beginning...Jackie Keswickhttp://jackiekeswick.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-17413569428925050912017-01-10T18:05:25.956-08:002017-01-10T18:05:25.956-08:00Haha...I hope Kyle knows what he's doing! :-DHaha...I hope Kyle knows what he's doing! :-DAddison Albrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12312474715024616907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-10599745987520511682017-01-08T18:27:42.130-08:002017-01-08T18:27:42.130-08:00lol maybe just a tad. But with very good reason an...lol maybe just a tad. But with very good reason and high hopes. Layla Dorinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-51079190617219875822017-01-08T18:26:33.142-08:002017-01-08T18:26:33.142-08:00:) Thank you. There will certainly be some tension...:) Thank you. There will certainly be some tension for awhile. Layla Dorinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-22985863885672928502017-01-08T18:25:38.332-08:002017-01-08T18:25:38.332-08:00:) little bit. His cousin and his best friend both...:) little bit. His cousin and his best friend both need a little TLC. Layla Dorinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-53470546588713332642017-01-08T18:19:53.522-08:002017-01-08T18:19:53.522-08:00Maybe a little, though he truly has both of their ...Maybe a little, though he truly has both of their best interests at heart. Unfortunately, there is a lot he doesn't know about why Jesse went up there to be alone. Layla Dorinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-30613870675418405562017-01-07T22:45:35.561-08:002017-01-07T22:45:35.561-08:00Haha. Someone's been set up!Haha. Someone's been set up!Louise Lyonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07242918949139231330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-2741831796209198252017-01-07T22:16:23.465-08:002017-01-07T22:16:23.465-08:00Nice tension here (and looks like the cousin is a ...Nice tension here (and looks like the cousin is a meddler)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-75781172018683576292017-01-07T15:53:25.855-08:002017-01-07T15:53:25.855-08:00I sense some meddling going on :DI sense some meddling going on :DNephy's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12677130973931453911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-14461033482376107922017-01-07T15:43:14.026-08:002017-01-07T15:43:14.026-08:00Kyle sounds like he's up to some mischief, LOL...Kyle sounds like he's up to some mischief, LOL.AM Leibowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04209724829228883552noreply@blogger.com