tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post806800538005645773..comments2024-01-02T22:33:52.873-08:00Comments on Rainbow Lyrics and Mellow Mushrooms: Rainbow Snippets June 4thLayla Dorinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16449120730961885097noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-91001216146064790692016-06-11T07:41:48.652-07:002016-06-11T07:41:48.652-07:00Love that last line, and this whole snippet.Love that last line, and this whole snippet.Antonia Aquilantehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11548735147144485171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-27821376201055422012016-06-06T04:20:20.100-07:002016-06-06T04:20:20.100-07:00Woo hoo. Loving so hard on this snippet for so man...Woo hoo. Loving so hard on this snippet for so many reasons. One of them is that I love semi colons and they are treated so, so badly by editors, I'm happy that they get elevated to where they belong :DNephy's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12677130973931453911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-89658258616578712292016-06-05T09:51:06.789-07:002016-06-05T09:51:06.789-07:00Love this snippet! <3 I've been trying to f...Love this snippet! <3 I've been trying to figure out where my semicolon tat is going to go. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00228896261596917489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-59576891770684789842016-06-05T08:36:17.618-07:002016-06-05T08:36:17.618-07:00Excellent!Excellent!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-89433196613265180182016-06-05T06:00:55.332-07:002016-06-05T06:00:55.332-07:00Great last line - brought a smile through the sadn...Great last line - brought a smile through the sadness.Alexa Milnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13899236787793545034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-62710931931689017862016-06-04T20:35:55.880-07:002016-06-04T20:35:55.880-07:00Jace's emotions come through so strongly.Jace's emotions come through so strongly.Jana Denardohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02307250641251992109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-65648359645058185342016-06-04T15:16:36.535-07:002016-06-04T15:16:36.535-07:00Love the emotion in this scene. :-)Love the emotion in this scene. :-)Addison Albrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12312474715024616907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-56193448675541574282016-06-04T15:14:04.084-07:002016-06-04T15:14:04.084-07:00Love that last line! Love that last line! JL Merrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15757616137877434008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-24085844992486125212016-06-04T12:58:41.866-07:002016-06-04T12:58:41.866-07:00Great snippet, very thought provoking.Great snippet, very thought provoking.Louise Lyonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07242918949139231330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-72978747431136507772016-06-04T12:18:59.327-07:002016-06-04T12:18:59.327-07:00Jace is right, it did make her ask. Lovely snippet...Jace is right, it did make her ask. Lovely snippet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18030323164132952433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-67284455003170018892016-06-04T11:58:10.059-07:002016-06-04T11:58:10.059-07:00Beautiful dialogue and description, dancing around...Beautiful dialogue and description, dancing around each other and the tattoo on Jace's arm. rhodrymavelynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12205976343207866410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6764792604731265668.post-50292450254635890782016-06-04T10:37:28.680-07:002016-06-04T10:37:28.680-07:00I have a whole lot of love for this snippet. No w...I have a whole lot of love for this snippet. No words, just a whole lot of love that I don't have words to express. PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.com