Saturday, December 12, 2015

Rainbow Snippet Dec 12

Hello Folks,

My 6 line snippet this week is taken from Burning Luck, my National Novel Writing Month Novel for last months insanity. I'm hoping to polish and submit it early next year.

“Can’t,” Cain gasped as he broke the kiss, but still kept a firm hold on a fistful of Thorn shirt. “I promised Lucky a massage.”

“Planning on playing a bit dirty with that massage?” Thorn asked, his eyes having darkened with desire.

“Planning on seeing how far he’ll let me take it,” Cain said with a mischievous grin.

Thorn’s eyes darkened a little more and yanked Cain to him in order to deliver a punishingly possessive kiss.

“Don’t fuck him without me.” Thorn ordered after he’d broken the kiss.

“You know I won’t, I just want to see if maybe he’s more open to the idea of joining us in our bed.”


  1. Oooh! Nice heat... and the promise of more... Love it!

  2. My goodness, plans!! Nice plot development.

  3. My goodness, plans!! Nice plot development.

  4. Ooh, i want to see if he's interested in the idea too! Very nice. :)

  5. Hmm, sounds like steaminess ahead! Love it :)

  6. Oh, come on, you can't stop here -_- Hope you polish it as soon as possible. Hope we'll get another 6 next week.