I love the challenge of choosing which Snippet to share and this week was really hard. In the end, I decided to go with a newly written section of Guitars and Cages 2 Ranch Days (working title)
“You little shit, you owe me!”
Asher slammed his hands against the glass, glaring right
back at his father.
“Do you remember the last thing you said to me?” Asher
snarled.
“The fuck that got to do with anything?”
“Everything. It has everything to do with why I hope you die in here, you prick!” Asher snarled, wishing he could reach through the glass.
Intense! I wonder what his father said to him. (It doesn't sound like they've ever had a great relationship.)
ReplyDeleteNope, no good between them at all. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely balance of rage and pain here :)
ReplyDelete:) Thank you
ReplyDeleteWhoa, i really want to know what he said to inspire that reaction. Cool snippet, Layla!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteWhoa. Prison? Dad in prison? OMG what for? What did he do? What did he say to Asher? More next week?
ReplyDeleteMore, please :)
ReplyDeleteIntense snippet! I could feel his anger and frustration. More please! :)
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