Saturday, January 2, 2016

Rainbow Snippet (Week 5)

Here we go with the week 5 Snippet. For those who might be new, Rainbow Snippets is a group of "Writers and bloggers who post 6 sentences of LGBTQ+ fiction or a book rec on their blogs or websites and link to it to the comments section of the group. which can be found here. There are plenty of writers to explore and enjoy.

This weeks snippet is from my biker MMM romance Burning Luck, currently in unedited first draft form.


“It’s not as complicated as you think. We’ve made the offer. All you have to do is accept it, accept us, both of us.”

“He’s…”

Lucky’s words failed him. Thorn was gruff, he was intense and demanding, he was also hot as hell and his words had a way of making the hair on the back of his neck prickle and his body hum with desire.

“What?” Cain prompted.

“Intense,” Lucky muttered lamely, prompting a chuckle from Cain. 

5 comments:

  1. Mmm, intense indeed. I want to read more of this :)

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  2. LOL I love the heat in this exchange :)

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  3. Very tense. I like that he's given a choice.

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  4. Definitely like the interaction and the heat here.

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