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“I can’t go
out there,” Moon declared, frantically scurrying between his amp and his
messenger bag, fingers fluttering as he gathered up cords and shoved them in zippered
pockets. His boot hit the metal leg of a folding chair, jostling it, and
sending a handful of guitar picks scattering across the floor.
Mikal caught
the sleeve of his shirt as he scrambled to pick them up. Giving it a little too
much of a tug, and spinning Moon around, his best friend crashing into him with
a yelp. The impact with the floor knocked half the air out of him. Moon landing
on top of him drove out the rest. Mikal lay there gasping and clutching his
side while Moon stumbled to his feet, tripped over an errant cord, and smacked
into the wall. Judging from the whimper and soft, choking gasp it must have
hurt. Cruel as it might be Mikal’s first thought was good.
"Good." Yipe!
ReplyDeleteOuch!
ReplyDeleteI've heard of stage fright, but this sounds more like a panic attack. Poor guy.
ReplyDeleteDramatic moment! Loved all the details, very well done snippet.
ReplyDeletePoor guy, loved all the little details like the guitar picks
ReplyDeleteA lot of chaos packed into this snippet. Poor guys. Not sure who I feel sorry for more.
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